Other than that, it was a pretty good story.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 23:03:23It was all one big sentence and If I wanted to read crap, I would read a stupid comic.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 16:11:59another load of infantile illiterate crapanonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 06:21:31A single block of text !! Xnxx hot 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-19 00:25:47Please if you are going to write a story, use paragraphs, punctuation and proper English. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-19 00:25:47Please if you are going to write a story, use paragraphs, punctuation and proper English. (:«12» 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-19 00:25:47Please if you are going to write a story, use paragraphs, punctuation and proper English. I know you made sentences it was just all smushed together like that it looks like one big sentence. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-19 00:25:47Please if you are going to write a story, use paragraphs, punctuation and proper English. And adding more details to make it longer would also help. And adding more details to make it longer would also help. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-19 00:25:47Please if you are going to write a story, use paragraphs, punctuation and proper English. Other than that, it was a pretty good story.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 23:03:23It was all one big sentence and If I wanted to read crap, I would read a stupid comic.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 16:11:59another load of infantile illiterate crapanonymous
