2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-22 15:49:24Story is good so far but plz atleast spellcheck good example: the caption of the football team. XNXX It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1» It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-22 15:49:24Story is good so far but plz atleast spellcheck good example: the caption of the football team. It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-22 15:49:24Story is good so far but plz atleast spellcheck good example: the caption of the football team. It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1» It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard
