This is because there really is little to no description on the main character at all. Again, description is a little better, grammar is still absolutely terrible, and I have no idea what the character, who I’m guessing is Ellen, looks like. Xnxx tv I have a decent idea what that means, but how does that play into the story? The majority of us know what a basic house and school layout is like, so there you’re fine. Also please go into a bit more detail about his passed, what made his family resent him so bad, and treat him the way they did. What makes these other male characters what to get their rocks off on and in him? I also liked your reference of Sasuke, which I’m guessing your referring to Sasuke Uchiha from the anime series Naruto. I see him as a boy with fairly feminine features, maybe a girlish ass. I have a decent idea what that means, but how does that play into the story? I do like how you were descriptive of Eric.
