hah and again…paragraphsAnonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 00:42:33paragraphs pleasefbaileyReport 2008-08-30 12:44:59You really need to use a spell checker and then you need to proofread your work before submitting it. its too short. Xnxx video this is a story not a movie details help the readers to involve in the scene as if they are watching it (some may masturbate) try to concentrate in ur next story also ur sex partner didn’t say much asif he is a machine. this is a story not a movie details help the readers to involve in the scene as if they are watching it (some may masturbate) try to concentrate in ur next story also ur sex partner didn’t say much asif he is a machine. The letter i needs to be capitalized. What I did read was okay but I had to stop because it was just too hard to ignore all the little stuff. And as everyone else has told you, you need to use paragraphs too. its too short. its a good story I liked it.Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 13:36:15waaaaaaaaay toooooooooooo shoooooooorrrrrrrttttt!!!!!!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 22:21:19build up to it a little bit more…it seemed like one minute you had neighbors and next you were giving a blowjob?
