1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story. XXNX and i’m inclined to give a negative vote for unlabled or mis labled stories.but i don’t for first time writer’s. there’s plenty of writing 101 on the internet.«1» 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story. but labling is important. your perspective need’s work. 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story. oh and like other first time writer’s. i’m bored by incest. look up story perspective what little i skimmed had a hercky jercky cadence. but labling is important. your perspective need’s work. and i’m inclined to give a negative vote for unlabled or mis labled stories.but i don’t for first time writer’s. and i’m inclined to give a negative vote for unlabled or mis labled stories.but i don’t for first time writer’s. oh and like other first time writer’s. 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story.
