What you want to do is have the story in your head recreated in the head of your reader, exactly the same as it is in yours. Transforming a story in your head to a story in print is an art. Sex xxnx Good grammar allows that to happen. It’s really bad, just stop.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-30 06:38:27i dont think it was that bad but could be better but please use the whole page when writing your story and i hope there is more to come , so dont stop writing but add a little something thats kinky into your story line«12» It will allow you to see some of the tools of the language we call Standard English.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-31 13:43:01really??? There is a famous book called “Eats Shoots and Leaves” by Lynne Truss. Transforming a story in your head to a story in print is an art. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-02 12:39:44I’m not sure what word processing program you used to write the story with, but I would suggest that you use one with a grammar tool. It’s really bad, just stop.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-30 06:38:27i dont think it was that bad but could be better but please use the whole page when writing your story and i hope there is more to come , so dont
