5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-09-13 05:11:42That’s really awkward. Dividing your stories into paragraphs and separating the paragraphs with spacing will make for an easier and better experience for your readers. xxnx tv But hilarious!anonymous readerReport 2012-09-03 01:49:03This is not bad for a first time effort. Your stories are likely to improve with experience. Dividing your stories into paragraphs and separating the paragraphs with spacing will make for an easier and better experience for your readers. Your stories are likely to improve with experience. Your stories are likely to improve with experience. OR maybe try again. that’s tne only comment i can add. that’s tne only comment i can add. OR maybe try again. A thumds down on this posting of your story.«1» A thumds down on this posting of your story.«1» OR maybe try again. But hilarious!anonymous readerReport 2012-09-03 01:49:03This is not bad for a first time effort. OR maybe try again. A thumds down on this posting of your story.«1» Also, more detail in the sexual content of the story would be welcome.dragon888Report 2012-09-02 02:31:48Bbbbbbbbbboooooooooooooooooooodragon888Report 2012-09-02 02:31:15I agree and it sucked dick badanonymous readerReport 2012-08-10 03:27:46SPACING. But hilarious!anonymous readerReport 2012-09-03 01:49:03This is not bad for a first time effort. Dividing your stories into paragraphs and separating the paragraphs with spacing will make for an easier and better experience for your
