Get someone who is literate to proof your story BEFORE submitting it. You scatter quotation marks totally at random – some hit the correct place in the sentence, but most do not. XXNX Maybe her mother will remember Ashlee’s attack on her while in she was in her drunken stupor; maybe her mother even planned for the event to happen with her daughter!! Very poor writing skills.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-19 12:28:52Is there any way that you can make readers understand that comments are meant to be about the story they just read? What a sneaky way to get published.«12345» Some readers want to tell their own life story as a comment. You scatter quotation marks totally at random – some hit the correct place in the sentence, but most do not. 69 comments«12345»olddogcummer1Report 2021-09-15 12:25:28very good syory ready for morebigdaddyg123Report 2014-04-08 18:47:28″Ashlee’s Young Life – Part 2″ – Ashlee and Unnamed Father – (Daughter and Unnamed Dad)
There is no mention nor discussion of birth control; Ashlee is thirteen and probably ovulating and there is great hope that she has “little sperm swimmers” fighting for the strongest to penetrate her cervix and germinate her egg!!
