lesen…Anonymous readerReport 2015-11-30 13:43:45awesome story man«12345» Someone who beat them up being kind to them doesn’t change them either. XXNX It’s way out on the fantasy end of science fiction, so I ignored the implausible science. An example: Most bullies are copying their parents treatment of them. 32 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-11 01:54:55Hopefully you’re interested in suggestions for improvement. The dialog and character interactions both left a lot to be desired if this is meant to be a story and not just an excuse for sex scenes. Bullies don’t change just because they lose a fight. The dialog and character interactions both left a lot to be desired if this is meant to be a story and not just an excuse for sex scenes. An example: Most bullies are copying their parents treatment of them. Bullies don’t change just because they lose a fight. 32 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-11 01:54:55Hopefully you’re interested in suggestions for improvement. It’s way out on the fantasy end of science fiction, so I ignored the implausible science. The dialog and character interactions both left a lot to be desired if this is meant to be a story and not just an excuse for sex scenes. An example: Most bullies are copying their parents treatment of them. And nothing can help them change
