4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 21:46:21Very poorly written. “walking up the the living room.” , “…gave my(sic) a boobjob”, “…what were were doing…”
This is pretty pitiful writing even if you are only 14.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:30:15Started out great and then you tried like hell to end it in half a paragraphanonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:29:54Started out great and then you tried like hell to end it in half a paragraphanonymous readerReport 2013-11-29 23:01:05Good, but way too short. XXX Xnxx Obviously, you did not proofread this or else you should have caught the duplication of words in your sentences. Obviously, you did not proofread this or else you should have caught the duplication of words in your sentences. (i.e. “walking up the the living room.” , “…gave my(sic) a boobjob”, “…what were were doing…”
This is pretty pitiful writing even if you are only 14.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:30:15Started out great and then you tried like hell to end it in half a paragraphanonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:29:54Started out great and then you tried like hell to end it in half a paragraphanonymous readerReport 2013-11-29 23:01:05Good, but way too short.
