look up story perspective what little i skimmed had a hercky jercky cadence. XXNX oh and like other first time writer’s. and i’m inclined to give a negative vote for unlabled or mis labled stories.but i don’t for first time writer’s. there’s plenty of writing 101 on the internet.«1» 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story. and i’m inclined to give a negative vote for unlabled or mis labled stories.but i don’t for first time writer’s. there’s plenty of writing 101 on the internet.«1» i’m bored by incest. oh and like other first time writer’s. oh and like other first time writer’s. oh and like other first time writer’s. your perspective need’s work. 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 08:41:07don’t take this as a crititicsm or a thumbs down on your story. i’m bored by incest. i’m bored by incest. i’m bored by incest. look up story perspective what little i skimmed had a hercky jercky cadence.
