2 comments«1»READERReport 2004-09-11 01:41:20Just split up the paragraphs better – i don’t like big blocks of text, it’s too easy to lose your place. Xnxx hd other than that, bravo!READERReport 2004-09-10 15:52:00Please leave as many comments as you want, tell me what you liked what you didn’t, what worked, what didn’t work, ideas for changing style, wording, anything, i can take any criticism you throw at me, believe me i AM my worst critic«1» other than that, bravo!READERReport 2004-09-10 15:52:00Please leave as many comments as you want, tell me what you liked what you didn’t, what worked, what didn’t work, ideas for changing style, wording, anything, i can take any criticism you throw at me, believe me i AM my worst critic«1» other than that, bravo!READERReport 2004-09-10 15:52:00Please leave as many comments as you want, tell me what you liked what you didn’t, what worked, what didn’t work, ideas for changing style, wording, anything, i can take any criticism you throw at me, believe me i AM my worst critic«1» other than that, bravo!READERReport 2004-09-10 15:52:00Please leave as many comments as you want, tell me what you liked what you didn’t, what worked, what didn’t work, ideas for changing style, wording, anything, i can take any criticism you throw at me, believe me i AM my worst critic«1»
