You did GREAT! xxnx tv prt 1 was great!Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-24 16:18:38Personally I would have liked it more if she had been able to travel back home and get revenge on her sister. jk. PLEASE KEEP WRITING, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD.purbratReport 2010-03-23 02:43:17I enjoyed this story! Got yourself a proofreader? Got yourself a proofreader? PLEASE KEEP WRITING, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD.purbratReport 2010-03-23 02:43:17I enjoyed this story! 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-03 22:01:31The story looks like its unfinished…but good story tho!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:52:23HEY! 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-03 22:01:31The story looks like its unfinished…but good story tho!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:52:23HEY! You did GREAT! PLEASE KEEP WRITING, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD.purbratReport 2010-03-23 02:43:17I enjoyed this story! prt 1 was great!Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-24 16:18:38Personally I would have liked it more if she had been able to travel back home and get revenge on her sister. prt 1 was great!Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-24 16:18:38Personally I would have liked it more if she had been able to travel back home and get revenge on her sister. prt 1 was great!Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-24 16:18:38Personally I would have liked it more if she had been able to travel back home and get revenge on her sister. Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck…
