22 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-06 14:29:22A good story but as already mentioned the spelling and the person view changing spoilt it a bit. Sex xxnx There is just no excuse for such fucked up spelling. 22 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-06 14:29:22A good story but as already mentioned the spelling and the person view changing spoilt it a bit. There is just no excuse for such fucked up spelling. And also switching from first to third person view.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-23 03:05:20Hard to enjoy the story with the horrendous spelling and the switching back and forth from first person and third person perspectives.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-09 23:43:04It feels like The Dead Zone and Fucked Out of Coma had a kid.«12345» 22 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-06 14:29:22A good story but as already mentioned the spelling and the person view changing spoilt it a bit. And also switching from first to third person view.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-23 03:05:20Hard to enjoy the story with the horrendous spelling and the switching back and forth from first person and third person perspectives.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-09 23:43:04It feels like The Dead Zone and Fucked Out of Coma had a kid.«12345» 22 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-06 14:29:22A good story but as already mentioned the spelling and the person view changing spoilt it a bit. Correct that and then you would have a lovely story.Catmandue53Report 2017-01-04 02:59:44Never, ever, have
