Venice, Athens and Istanbul are NOT on the Baltic Sea. A bit of editing, and this story would be fabulous.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 01:14:39Giant wall of solid text = not even attempting to read since author didn’t even attempt to make it readable. XNXX 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2013-06-16 12:25:16Very hard to read clumped together as it is BUT a great story. I got lost within the first 15 sentences – not worth the time to try and follow – – punctuation really helps if you really want it to be read«1» So negative vote instantly.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 00:33:53paragraphs?? Please break it down into readable sections so I may enjoy reading it again. I got lost within the first 15 sentences – not worth the time to try and follow – – punctuation really helps if you really want it to be read«1» What are they teaching kids these days?anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 02:21:21I really liked the story, but the other commenters notes about the solid wall of text is quite true. Please break it down into readable sections so I may enjoy reading it again.
