5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-05-14 03:36:47need more too shortREADERReport 2004-09-01 09:26:25good story just 1 thing make the story a bit longer but not too much.READERReport 2004-04-09 19:53:15The beginning of the story had great incentive, but as it concluded, there was nothing there to please the reader.READERReport 2004-03-23 21:59:08it was a great beginning to what in fact was to short and thus implausible…READERReport 2004-03-15 19:47:36to short«1» 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-05-14 03:36:47need more too shortREADERReport 2004-09-01 09:26:25good story just 1 thing make the story a bit longer but not too much.READERReport 2004-04-09 19:53:15The beginning of the story had great incentive, but as it concluded, there was nothing there to please the reader.READERReport 2004-03-23 21:59:08it was a great beginning to what in fact was to short and thus implausible…READERReport 2004-03-15 19:47:36to short«1» 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-05-14 03:36:47need more too shortREADERReport 2004-09-01 09:26:25good story just 1 thing make the story a bit longer but not too much.READERReport 2004-04-09 19:53:15The beginning of the story had great incentive, but as it concluded, there was nothing there to please the reader.READERReport 2004-03-23 21:59:08it was a great beginning to what in fact was to short and thus implausible…READERReport 2004-03-15 19:47:36to short«1» 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-05-14 03:36:47need more too shortREADERReport 2004-09-01 09:26:25good story just 1 thing make the story a bit longer but not too much.READERReport 2004-04-09 19:53:15The beginning of the story had great incentive, but as it concluded, there was nothing there
