Try taking the criticism to heart and give reader’s some consideration. “If you can’t stand the heat, then get out of the kitchen.”anonymous readerReport 2013-10-03 10:03:09there’s a tremendous difference in great writers who write ‘in dialog’ and of course use the slang of the times, IE: Mark Twain etc. Xnxx hot . . . …and someone like yourself who claims that’s what he is just because he’s too fucking lazy to use a spell check program
and then there will always be another idiot/lazy/ignorant asshole to tell him ‘you go’ if it even was someone else commenting. That is a sure way to avoid criticism. I think that most of the negative comments that your stories have elicited are more constructive than destructive. That is a sure way to avoid criticism. Cool.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-04 15:13:51I feel that you are far too thin-skinned and defensive to ever be a good writer. why do I get the feeling you came and commented on your own story anonymously, there are better ways to stroke yourself you knowanonymous readerReport 2013-10-02 16:53:00you go! why do I get the feeling you came and commented on your own story anonymously, there are better ways to stroke yourself you knowanonymous readerReport 2013-10-02 16:53:00you go!
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