2 comments«1»AquaMastaReport 2009-09-02 05:30:08Getting better, I like the story line but a little more “sex” or at least some touching would be nice. 2 comments«1»AquaMastaReport 2009-09-02 05:30:08Getting better, I like the story line but a little more “sex” or at least some touching would be nice. Xnxx tv If you’re going to title a story “Pixie Lust”, please add a little lust, and not just adventure and intrigue. =dreamer=«1» =dreamer=«1» It would have been fine to work in a little jail cell sex. =dreamer=«1» When you have this many different characters in one scene, use fewer pronouns so it’s easier to keep track of what’s actually happening. If you’re going to title a story “Pixie Lust”, please add a little lust, and not just adventure and intrigue. It would have been fine to work in a little jail cell sex. 2 comments«1»AquaMastaReport 2009-09-02 05:30:08Getting better, I like the story line but a little more “sex” or at least some touching would be nice. When you have this many different characters in one scene, use fewer pronouns so it’s easier to keep track of what’s actually happening.
