Glowing Ember Stone Takes A Hard Workout Between The Weights

so I will give this story series an overall 5/10. Also shit way to end it. XXNX that being said I know this is a work of fiction but you raced through several things that should have had more of a build up. that being said I know this is a work of fiction but you raced through several things that should have had more of a build up. Which in fact was rather annoying and I had to skip most of that scene since you kept using “She” to acknowledge both women. You should had added more parts.Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-30 21:55:58Please do more the best stories I’ve ever read PleaseMerc098Report 2016-03-31 08:25:36ok so apart from the spelling and grammar errors, your story has much to be desired. cliffhangers are not fun«12345» But didn’t like the Cliffhangers at the end though. But didn’t like the Cliffhangers at the end though. You should clarify which was doing what thus allowing better understanding of the situation. You should had added more parts.Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-30 21:55:58Please do more the best stories I’ve ever read PleaseMerc098Report 2016-03-31 08:25:36ok so apart from the spelling and grammar errors, your story has much to be desired.