I would have liked it if you were more descriptive of Claire and Dean’s feelings about what was happening to themselves and their thoughts about what their partner might be feeling. Good love making also involves a lot more foreplay than you described. XXX Xnxx 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-26 22:15:01A GOOD STORY YOU COULD HAVE GONE INTO MORE DEPTH IN THIER LOVE MAKING KEEP TRYINGthesilent1Report 2013-03-05 18:38:51Well, I had enjoyed reading your first shared story on here. Anon reader did said some good key points about it. Good love making also involves a lot more foreplay than you described. Good love making also involves a lot more foreplay than you described. I felt that the sex scene was decent, but it could had be more drawn out with more sexual foreplay. I felt that the sex scene was decent, but it could had be more drawn out with more sexual foreplay. ;)«12» I very much like it the way it is. Anon reader did said some good key points about it. The foreplay could give an opportunity to not only describe these feelings, but also lengthen the story.
