if he doesn’t like it, go read an american written story. XXNX but where does amie fit into it all? 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-25 19:26:26fantastic, ingore the comments about the british lingo, that guy’s obviously a complete joker. this was a pretty good story, good detail, short stories are seldom very interesting, mostly missing important detail, or not expanding enough on subjects that could make it better. more!!READERReport 2007-04-21 13:50:14too long? Stories with sex is wat its supposed to be & not the other way round..ppl here dont the point i guess. …keep up the good work looking forward to a equally fantastic series…good luck…write fast;)«12» Stories with sex is wat its supposed to be & not the other way round..ppl here dont the point i guess. …keep up the good work looking forward to a equally fantastic series…good luck…write fast;)«12» maybe add a sensual and erotic yet very kinky mff threesome and you’ve got a great series to build upon.READERReport 2007-04-16 16:44:32great story. Like the other writer said, “Stories with sex, not the other way around” Looking forward to moreREADERReport 2007-04-03 17:56:41Buddy i think it was a fantastic story…love the way u tell stories. …coz thts the way to tell em…
