3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-14 01:18:28good work. Might be just me tho!anonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 00:40:03ANOTHER GREAT PART WELL WRITTI=EN AND THE STORY IS SOGOOD KEEP THE SERIES GOING
;; JJ«1» I shall keep reading your seriesanonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 04:43:45Great story, really enjoying the series. XXNX Might be just me tho!anonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 00:40:03ANOTHER GREAT PART WELL WRITTI=EN AND THE STORY IS SOGOOD KEEP THE SERIES GOING
;; JJ«1» My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for example hearin or hearing. My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for example hearin or hearing. My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for example hearin or hearing. My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for example hearin or hearing. I like a story that explains the whole picture, so leaving out big details like this lessens the experience for me. 🙂
With the effort it takes to add the ‘ it makes it just too deliberate, for me. I assume this was her first time, so where was the explanation of her hymen breaking? I like a story that explains the whole picture,
