Switching from first to third person is troublesome but you are going good with content. i am not a writer but i am trying. Sex xxnx why? 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 00:58:30you went from first to third person. why? why? I look forward to more.«1» Switching from first to third person is troublesome but you are going good with content. it was going well.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 20:24:26Excellent story, would like a continuation of it.oldeoldmanReport 2013-01-05 08:54:18thank you! it was going well.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 20:24:26Excellent story, would like a continuation of it.oldeoldmanReport 2013-01-05 08:54:18thank you! may need an editor. may need an editor. I look forward to more.«1» why? i am not a writer but i am trying. it was going well.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 20:24:26Excellent story, would like a continuation of it.oldeoldmanReport 2013-01-05 08:54:18thank you! I look forward to more.«1» Switching from first to third person is troublesome but you are going good with content. may need an editor. may need an editor. i have more stories in my head but i am going to continue with the slaver story a littleanonymous readerReport 2013-01-05 00:39:39Great potential.
