I’am very sorry about the weird A’s but they were not there when I submitted the stories so can any members on this that knows how i can take them out because i want all my stories to be the best for you guys. Xnxx tv Also can someone point out the spelling and grammatical errors (other than the weirds A’s) in my stories because i just put this through a spell check on Microsoft word and there were no mistakes???anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:27:51Good story but leave the  out of the storyanonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 23:19:06I gave you a positive rating because your subject matter has promise and this story definitely needs to be continued. You have numerous spelling and grammatical errors which should be obvious to you when you proof read your work. I admit I didn’t make it even a third of the way through this story. Way too choppy and hard to read. Other than that, good job. You have numerous spelling and grammatical errors which should be obvious to you when you proof read your work. With that being said, you definitely need to proof read your work before submitting it, or else have someone do it for you.
