I do hope to see a continuation of this. Thanksanonymous readerReport 2010-11-01 00:31:56This was a truly delightful and beautiful story without losing any of its eroticism. Sex xxnx I guess as far as the writting goes, this should be a complement. What follwed didn’t even register, really. Is English your second language?anonymous readerReport 2011-02-28 05:03:35A great story, well written and so much compassion. Both the preflude and the actual sex were skillfully described makig the reader feel part of the story.anonymous readerReport 2010-10-29 18:43:33Well constructed, thought out and executed story in American English with a knowledge of word structure and syntax – a very pleasant change. Please continue this level of work.anonymous readerReport 2010-10-29 14:27:20Too well written? What follwed didn’t even register, really. I got hung up with the grief process, the compassion. 8 comments«12»al bellReport 2017-06-18 03:57:09This is a good story but you need to take a course on grammar. Is English your second language?anonymous readerReport 2011-02-28 05:03:35A great story, well written and so much compassion. I guess as far as the writting goes, this should be a complement. It is ment to be.«12» I guess as far as the writting goes, this should be a complement. What follwed didn’t even register, really. It is ment to be.«12» Both the preflude and the actual sex were skillfully described
