16 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-09 01:38:14Its kind of good but u should have more details for the three some on the next storyanonymous readerReport 2012-12-28 19:31:26We don’t even know what the chick looks like besides that she has big boobs?READERReport 2008-03-27 03:45:19dont write anymoreREADERReport 2007-02-15 15:39:55The sex scene needs a ton of work. Xnxx tv Good luckREADERReport 2005-12-04 17:24:56hey dude you did rush it a bit at the end but everyone has said that already. Good luckREADERReport 2005-12-04 17:24:56hey dude you did rush it a bit at the end but everyone has said that already. Good luckREADERReport 2005-12-04 17:24:56hey dude you did rush it a bit at the end but everyone has said that already. 16 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-09 01:38:14Its kind of good but u should have more details for the three some on the next storyanonymous readerReport 2012-12-28 19:31:26We don’t even know what the chick looks like besides that she has big boobs?READERReport 2008-03-27 03:45:19dont write anymoreREADERReport 2007-02-15 15:39:55The sex scene needs a ton of work. A better physical discription of the slut woul dhelp as well. go into detail abou the feeling and the action.
