That, along with everything else (including the atrocious grammar) ruined the entire plot for me. Xnxx tv The author just threw her credibility out the window. Typos are like potholes, they slow or disrupt your journey if they are large or if there are a lot. And what is with all the damn commas where they’re not needed?«12345» It has to be pretty bad before you can’t get to the end. It sounded like they were in high school, especially when the cliched truth-or-dare got thrown in. It sounded like they were in high school, especially when the cliched truth-or-dare got thrown in. Rhiannon leaves in a few grammatical and spelling errors but nothing you can’t easily figure out.Anonymous readerReport 2014-10-11 05:31:05Long chapter of women drinking and bonding, drinking and shopping, drinking and becoming bi-sexual. CoachAnonymous readerReport 2015-06-27 04:47:47I’ve just recently been reading the author’s running story line. Typos are like potholes, they slow or disrupt your journey if they are large or if there are a lot. I READ YOUR WORK WHEN FIRST POSTED AND HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT IT SINCE.
