But thank you for your reply 🙂 I will try to go more slowly from here and remember to reread my chapters before posting them :)«12» Though there are ways how he could have put it away (hands tied in front of hi body), I completely forgot he was tied up xD. xxnx tv One of the basics in dialogue is to start a new paragraph when the speaker changes. Also please forgive my lack of punctuation. But thank you for your reply 🙂 I will try to go more slowly from here and remember to reread my chapters before posting them :)anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 16:15:28Hey Kitsune_Lord, thank you for your response. One of the basics in dialogue is to start a new paragraph when the speaker changes. One of the basics in dialogue is to start a new paragraph when the speaker changes. Also please forgive my lack of punctuation. You obviously have a story to tell in your head and you want to get it out. This eliminates relying on literary intuition or repetative he said she said. This eliminates relying on literary intuition or repetative he said she said.
